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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study at a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in the college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are, and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the matter related to my accommodation in the college, I have been enrolled in your college and my class will start in next year, so I would like to seek your assistance in this matter. My name is Karthika Warrier, and my major subject is Business Administration. My concern about the stay over there is that, I prefer a single room, over group stay since I have some serious wheezing problem which demand me to stay alone. Sometimes, I failed to sleep for hours because of this, and this could affect my roommates peace of mind and stay. I really don"t want to trouble them anyway. Moreover, I am a vegetarian, and If I would have to stay with a non-vegetarian and vegetarian dishes are not available in college residence that will again a problem to me. If it is not served there, please suggest the best option I can avail near the hostel. I hope now you understood my concerns over the stay at college residence. If you can guide me with the best alternative accommodation, I can opt in the immediate vicinity of the college, that would be a great help. Anyway, I anticipate that, I will get a single room in the college premises itslf so that I dont need to go out and search for my accomodation. I am expecting to hear from you at the earliest, so that I can get prepared for the same as early as possible. Your's faithfully, Karthika Warrier
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the matter related to my accommodation in the college,

I have
been enrolled
in your college and my
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class
will
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start
in
next
year,
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so
I would like to seek your assistance in this matter.

My name is
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Karthika
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Warrier
, and my major subject is Business Administration. My concern about the
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stay
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over


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there
is that, I prefer a single room, over group
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stay
since I have
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some
serious wheezing problem which demand

me to
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stay
alone.
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Sometimes
, I failed to sleep for hours
because of this
, and this could affect my roommates

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peace
of mind and
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stay
. I
really
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don"t
want to trouble them anyway.

Moreover
, I am a vegetarian, and If I would
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have to
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stay
with a non-vegetarian and vegetarian dishes are

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not
available in college residence that will again a problem to me. If it is not served there,
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please
suggest
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the


A determiner is probably missing here: "the best".
best
option I can avail near the hostel.

I hope
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now
you understood my concerns over the
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stay
at college residence. If you can guide me with the

best alternative accommodation, I can opt in the immediate vicinity of the college, that would be a
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great


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help
. Anyway, I anticipate that, I will
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get
a single room in the college premises
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itslf
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so
that

I
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dont
need to go out and search for my
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accomodation
.

I am expecting to hear from you at the earliest,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
prepared for the same as early as possible.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your's
faithfully
,

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Karthika
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Warrier
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IELTS letter You are going to study at a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in the college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are, and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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  American English
14 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study at a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in the college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college giving your accommodation requirements. You should outline what your room and food needs are, and also ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,