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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do GEwe
Dear Sir, I am reaching out to you regarding the keyboard issue that I am currently encountering. All started today morning; I turned on my laptop and trying to enter the user name and password system showing notification of wrong credentials. After a couple of tries and unhiding the password, realized that the keys with letter C and J are stop printing. However, to that, I managed to log onto the machine using a built-in virtual keyboard. But I am not sure this will last forever because it is hard to use a virtual board and causing my work efficiency. This Friday is the last day for project submission, and I am already behind schedule. Since my device is under the guaranty, would you kindly notify your Service team about my problem and also, meanwhile, can you send the request to them to provide me an external keyboard. Thank you for considering, and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Bala
Dear Sir,

I am reaching out to you regarding the keyboard issue that I am
currently
encountering.

All
started
today morning
; I turned on my laptop and trying to enter the user name and password system showing notification of
wrong
credentials. After a couple of tries and
unhiding
the password, realized that the keys with letter C and J are
stop
printing.

However
, to that, I managed to log onto the machine using a built-in virtual keyboard.
But
I am not sure this will last forever
because
it is
hard
to
use
a virtual board and causing my work efficiency. This Friday is the last day for project submission, and I am already behind schedule.

Since my device is under the guaranty, would you kindly notify your Service team about my problem and
also
, meanwhile, can you
send
the request to them to provide me an external keyboard.

Thank you for considering, and I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Best regards,

Bala
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IELTS letter You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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