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One of your friends is coming back from abroad. But you are held up due to some engagements and are unable to go and receive him at the airport. Write him a letter. In your letter, apologize for not being able to come tell him the reason suggest him an alternative and talk about the plan Write at least 150 words.

One of your friends is coming back from abroad. But you are held up due to some engagements and are unable to go and receive him at the airport. Write him a letter. In your letter, apologize for not being able to come tell him the reason suggest him an alternative and talk about the plan LKGn
Dear Tom, Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to tell you that I won't be able to come and pick you up from Tullamarine airport. Please accept my apologise for changes in plan. My family and I were waiting for long time to see you but I got an important meeting to attend with my one of important clients on the same day. Due to commitments with the client, I am obliged to attend the meeting. You need not to worry about your stay and pickup. I will book a cab to pick you from the airport and will share the cab details two days prior of your travel. I have already booked a hotel ' The Victoria' for your entire stay in Melbourne. After your long day of travelling from London to Melbourne, you can relax at hotel then I will catch you in the evening. Later, we will come to my home and enjoy dinner with my family. See you soon. Best wishes. Priyanka
Dear Tom,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to
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and pick you up from
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airport.

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accept my
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meeting to attend with my one of
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clients on the same day. Due to commitments with the client, I
am obliged
to attend the meeting. You need not
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to worry
about your stay and pickup. I will book a cab to pick you from the airport and will share the cab
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details
two days prior of your travel. I have already booked a hotel
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The Victoria' for your entire stay in Melbourne. After your long day of travelling from London to Melbourne, you can relax at hotel then I will catch you in the evening. Later, we will
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come
to my home and enjoy dinner with my family.

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you
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Best wishes.

Priyanka

IELTS letter One of your friends is coming back from abroad. But you are held up due to some engagements and are unable to go and receive him at the airport. Write him a letter. In your letter, apologize for not being able to come tell him the reason suggest him an alternative and talk about the plan

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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