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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday k9bK

Dear Sue, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am thrilled to know that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. I’d be more than happy to give you a piece of advice as I have more experience of camping. Traveling to a camping destination would be a good opportunity to spend more time with your loved ones and enjoy nature. Most of the camping guides will provide you with a map of the location. This way, you can trek in the forest and witness wild animals if you’re lucky. Although this kind of holding will be exciting, I should mention a few possible drawbacks which should be considered. You may find many insects in the camping ground, and the weather might be windy during the night. Since it’s been a long time, we met each other. I would love to accompany you on this adventure. Please let me know the dates so that I can reprioritize my schedule. Keep in touch. Yours lovingly, Abirami Ramesh

Dear Sue,

I hope you and your family are doing well. I am thrilled
 to know that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first
 time this summer. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’d be more than happy to give you a piece of advice as I have more experience of camping.

Traveling to a camping destination would be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 opportunity to spend more time with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 ones and enjoy nature. Most of the camping guides will provide you with a map of the location. This way, you can trek in the forest and witness wild animals if you’re lucky.

Although this kind of holding will be exciting, I should mention a few possible drawbacks which should be considered
. You may find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 insects in the camping ground, and the weather might be windy during the night.

Since it’s been a long time, we met each other. I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to accompany you on this adventure. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know the dates This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can Possible spelling mistake found.
reprioritize
 my schedule.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in touch.

Yours lovingly
,

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Abirami
 Ramesh