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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do NGym
Dear Sir, I am Karan Patel resident of 813 2nd Street west Brooks. I am writing this letter reading the Fast bus service which is running in our area, It is not coming on time daily since last two week. Firstly, there are many people in my area who used this bus facility to go to their work place and some students also travel during weekdays. We all totally depend on this bus to travel any where from my area. Secondly, we can not effort to take taxi every day, it is too expensive. Even there is no other bus coming in our area. Some times we reach at office very late. Please add 2 more extra buses in the morning time, so that people get some options as per their job timing. I appreciate your quick response in this matter. Your sincerely, Karan Patel
Dear Sir,

I am
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Karan
Patel resident of 813 2nd Street west Brooks. I am writing this letter reading the
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Fast
bus service which is running in our
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area
, It is not coming on time daily since last two week.

Firstly
, there are
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many
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people
in my
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area
who
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used
this bus facility to go to their work place and
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some
students
also
travel during weekdays. We all
totally
depend on this bus to travel
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any where
from my
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area
.
Secondly
, we
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can not effort
to take taxi every day, it is too expensive. Even there is no other bus coming in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
.
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Some
times we reach at office
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very
late.

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Please
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add
2 more extra buses in the morning time,
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so
that
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people
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get
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some
options as per their job timing. I appreciate your quick response in this matter.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

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Karan
Patel

IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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  American English
6 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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