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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. NGyd
Dear Mr Walker, I am writing to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager which was adverted on the University's notice board. As I am studying Master of Business Administration which planned to graduate at the end of the coming semester, I guess it is a positive qualitification to meet your requirement. Furthermore, I am a Bachelor Degree in Computer Science holder. Consequently, some general technical skill can be solved with my own knowledge. In addition, I am now working as an assistant manager in my company, which contains more than 100 people. I am happy to provide my supervisor's contact information to you in order to prove my communication and management skill. As long as you have any queries, please contact me with the phone number mentioned above. I hope you will consider my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Doe
Dear Mr Walker,

I am writing to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager which
was adverted
on the University's notice board.

As I am studying Master of Business Administration which planned to graduate at the
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end
of the coming semester, I guess it is a
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positive
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qualitification
to
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meet
your requirement.
Furthermore
, I am a Bachelor Degree in Computer Science holder.
Consequently
,
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some
general technical
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skill
can
be solved
with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
knowledge.

In addition
, I am
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now
working as an assistant manager in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, which contains more than 100
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. I am happy to provide my supervisor's contact information to you in order to prove my communication and management
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
.

As long as you have any queries,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
contact me with the phone number mentioned above. I hope you will consider my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Doe

IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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