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You work at home and have a problem of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or a company which supplied the equipment .

You work at home and have a problem of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or a company which supplied the equipment. WmyeW
Dear sir /madam, I am writing a letter to you regarding a recording mic, which I purchased form you. I am working as an Anchor in a Music company and do entire work online from home. Last year in December, I bought a recording mic of Sony Company from your shop. It was working extremely well in starting even I loved it's recording quality on the contrary it has been having a problem for few days, Sometimes its starts automatically and sometimes stopped, Once it was totally stopped for whole day and I tried a number of time on the contrary it was not started. Moreover, it's bothers me a lot, when I ought to start interviews, I can't explain to interviewer because they can't listen me properly, with this sometimes when I started interviews, it stopped in between and also facing the problem when I records a bite. It's my humble request to you that please change this mic as in the near future as you can because it's the most essential gadget of my job. It has a 1-year guarantee too and now merely 4 months have been passed. I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding my concern, consequently that I can continue my work quick. Your faithfully Cash
Dear sir /madam,

I am writing a letter to you regarding a recording mic, which I
purchased
form you. I am working as an Anchor in a Music
company
and do entire work online from home.

Last year in December, I
bought
a recording mic of Sony
Company
from your shop. It was working
extremely
well in starting even I
loved
it's recording quality
on the contrary
it has been having a problem for few days,
Sometimes
its
starts
automatically
and
sometimes
stopped
, Once it was
totally
stopped
for whole day and I tried a number of time
on the contrary
it was not
started
.

Moreover
, it's bothers me a lot, when I ought to
start
interviews, I can't
explain
to interviewer
because
they can't listen me
properly
, with this
sometimes
when I
started
interviews, it
stopped
in between and
also
facing the problem when I
records
a bite.

It's my humble request to you that
please
change
this mic as in the near future as you can
because
it's the most essential gadget of my job. It has a 1-year guarantee too and
now
merely
4 months have
been passed
.

I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding my concern,
consequently
that I can continue my work quick.

Your
faithfully


Cash
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IELTS letter You work at home and have a problem of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or a company which supplied the equipment.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
216 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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