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Write a letter to your landlord, expressing your dissatisfaction with the noise in the block of flats that he owns. You can have following; Where you reside, The issue, and what he has to do

Write a letter to your landlord, expressing your dissatisfaction with the noise in the block of flats that he owns. You can have following; Where you reside, The issue, and what he has to do XnGQq
Dear Mr. Mike, I am writing to make a complaint about residents who are living at the same apartment building as they are making a high level of noise particularly at night almost on every day. I am a tent of your apartments who has been residing for three months at 8th floor with my children and two cooperative neighbours. The problem here is that some tenets of this building make parties often. At night. You know that my daughter has school early in the morning and I also woke up to go to office at the same time. As they produce noise at a great extent, my child and I have to stay up at midnight to wait for the parties to over. Due to this, it is difficult for us to wake up in the morning. As it is happening frequently, my child is becoming sick. I would request you to tell them not to make noise after o o’clock at night and also keep the noise level at acceptable level so as not to have problem any longer. I would appreciate if you take this matter to be solved as early as possible. I am looking forward to your reply soon. Kind regards, Shin
Dear Mr. Mike,

I am writing to
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make
a complaint about residents who are living at the same apartment building as they are making a high level of
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noise
particularly
at night almost on every day.

I am a tent of your apartments who has been residing for three months at 8th floor with my children and two cooperative
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neighbours
.

The problem here is that
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some
tenets of this building
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make
parties
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often
. At night. You know that my daughter has school early in the morning and I
also
woke up to go to office at the same time. As they produce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
at a great extent, my child and I
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have to
stay up at midnight to wait for the parties to over. Due to this, it is difficult for us to wake up in the morning. As it is happening
frequently
, my child is becoming sick.

I would request you to
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tell
them not to
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make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
after
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o o
’clock at night and
also
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keep
the
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noise
level at acceptable level
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so
as not to have problem any longer.

I would appreciate if you take this matter to
be solved
as early as possible.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to your reply
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soon
.

Kind regards,

Shin
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord, expressing your dissatisfaction with the noise in the block of flats that he owns. You can have following; Where you reside, The issue, and what he has to do

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  American English
9 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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