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Write a letter to your landlord, expressing your dissatisfaction with the noise in the block of flats that he owns. You can have following; Where you reside, The issue, and what he has to do

Write a letter to your landlord, expressing your dissatisfaction with the noise in the block of flats that he owns. You can have following; Where you reside, The issue, and what he has to do XnGQq

Dear Mr. Mike, I am writing to make a complaint about residents who are living at the same apartment building as they are making a high level of noise particularly at night almost on every day. I am a tent of your apartments who has been residing for three months at 8th floor with my children and two cooperative neighbours. The problem here is that some tenets of this building make parties often. At night. You know that my daughter has school early in the morning and I also woke up to go to office at the same time. As they produce noise at a great extent, my child and I have to stay up at midnight to wait for the parties to over. Due to this, it is difficult for us to wake up in the morning. As it is happening frequently, my child is becoming sick. I would request you to tell them not to make noise after o o’clock at night and also keep the noise level at acceptable level so as not to have problem any longer. I would appreciate if you take this matter to be solved as early as possible. I am looking forward to your reply soon. Kind regards, Shin

Dear Mr. Mike,

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make
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noise
particularly
 at night almost on every day.

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some
 tenets of this building This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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noise
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have to
 stay up at midnight to wait for the parties to over. Due to this, it is difficult for us to wake up in the morning. As it is happening frequently
, my child is becoming sick.

I would request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
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make
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noise
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o o
’clock at night and also
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keep
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcryexplosionroarcacophonycommotioncrash
noise
 level at acceptable level This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 as not to have problem any longer.

I would appreciate if you take this matter to be solved
 as early as possible.

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 am looking forward to your reply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Kind regards,

Shin