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Emigration apply for overseas

Emigration apply for overseas 7JJrb

Dear Mr Johnson, I have made on of the biggest decisions in my life and I want to emigrate for that, I really tend to study in a modern country specially Canada because I see my major there lighter and better. It would be very kind of you to answer back some of my questions, I wondered if your school has any grade in the or any glory recently in the country. How many students are studying there now and are we would be able to work in school? And my last question is how much time does it take to get formal English certificate? I forgot to mention if I get covered by school accommodation like: dormitory and nutrition. On of my biggest desires is to work in another great country specially in a great school. Please consider it serious. Your sincerely, Sina Bakhtiarinia

Dear Mr Johnson,

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Please
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