Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Introduction of the company

Introduction of the company 25bXb
Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from Lipidome Lifesciences. We introduce ourselves as "Lipidome Lifesciences", the only manufacturers of Phospholipid fractions in India.  We have our manufacturing plant and office at Vanthvadi, Ta. Mahemdabad, Dist. Kheda, Gujarat. We manufacture Phospholipids from soya and egg, containing Phosphatidylcholine up to 90% from Soy in powder, liquid and wax form, and up to 100% from Egg in powder and wax form.  We also manufacture Hydrogenated Phosphatidylcholine from Soy up to 90% in powder form. Lipidome Lifesciences is a very niche manufacturing facility as per WHO GMP Standards, and ever established by any Indian company as only a few manufacturers globally produce phosphatidylcholine 70% and above, besides Indian Pharmaceutical Companies are the biggest importer of these products from Europe. Our products are tested and analysed according to international standards. You can find out more information on our website at www. lipidome. in. Please click here to open the Catalog, Plant Video, Product List and Specifications of our products. Thanks and Regards, N. K. Patel - +91-9428631621 Lipidome Lifesciences Address:   Block No. 2050-51, At Vanthwali - 387430, Ta: Mahemdabad, Dist. : Kheda, Gujarat, India. Ph: +91-2694-296196 Email:  27lipidome@gmail. com
Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lipidome
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lifesciences
.

We introduce ourselves as
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lipidome
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lifesciences
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
manufacturers of Phospholipid fractions in India.  We have our manufacturing plant and office at
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vanthvadi
, Ta.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mahemdabad
, Dist.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kheda
, Gujarat. We manufacture Phospholipids from
Possible spelling mistake found.
soya
and egg, containing
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phosphatidylcholine
up to 90% from Soy in powder, liquid and wax form, and up to 100% from Egg in powder and wax form.  We
also
manufacture Hydrogenated
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phosphatidylcholine
from Soy up to 90% in powder form.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Lipidome
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lifesciences
is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
niche manufacturing facility as per WHO GMP Standards, and ever established by any Indian
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a few manufacturers globally produce
Possible spelling mistake found.
phosphatidylcholine
70% and above,
besides
Indian Pharmaceutical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Companies
are the biggest importer of these products from Europe.

Our products are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
and
Possible spelling mistake. 'analysed' is British English.
analysed
according to international standards.

You can find out more information on our website at 
Possible spelling mistake found.
www
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
lipidome
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
click here to open the Catalog, Plant Video, Product List and Specifications of our products.

Thanks and Regards,

N. K. Patel
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
 +91-9428631621 
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lipidome
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lifesciences


Address:
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
Block No. 2050-51, At
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vanthwali
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
387430,

Ta:
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mahemdabad
, Dist. :
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kheda
, Gujarat, India.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ph
: +91-2694-296196 Email:
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
27lipidome@gmail.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter Introduction of the company

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts