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You have a lost a item on holiday. Where it was .

You have a lost a item on holiday. Where it was. yPX6J

Dear sir/madam, I am writing to inform you that the most precious item of my life had been lost in Chandigarh while i was gone with my family on holiday. I would like to tell you about my most valuable item was a camera of Cannon Company. I bought it form Patiala a 1 year ago in cost rs 40000. I have all the bills and receipts of the camra. it was a 20 resolution with brown cover. Last week i was gone whole family in Rock garden, Chandigarh on winter vacations. Where we had had a coffe in a restaurant. When we arrived our next station, i realized that something missing in my hand then i saw my camera was not in my hand. So here i am entitled you please tell me the all process of taken insurance, which paper i have submitted so that i will buy Again it soon. I hope you will recieve my request as soon as possible. Your faithfully Gursimran

Dear sir/madam,

I am writing to inform you that the most precious item of my life had been lost
 in Chandigarh while Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompanied
gone with
 my family on holiday.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about my most valuable item was a camera of Cannon This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
Company
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it form Possible spelling mistake found.PartialSpatialPadillaPatellaPatinaPapilla
Patiala
 a When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "1-year"1-year
1 year
 ago in cost rs 40000. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have all the bills and receipts of the Possible spelling mistake found.cameraCapraCaraCamryTamra
camra
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 was a 20 resolution with brown cover.

Last week Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
was gone
 whole family in Rock garden, Chandigarh on winter vacations. “Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where
 we had had a Possible spelling mistake found.coffeeCoffeycofferCOFF
coffe
 in a restaurant. When we arrived our next
 station, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 realized that something missing in my hand then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 my camera was not in my hand.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 here Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
am entitled
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me the all process of taken insurance, which paper Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have submitted This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 Again it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

I hope you will Possible spelling mistake found.receiverelieve
recieve
 my request as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Your faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.
Gursimran