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You work as a part-time employee in a company. The company has recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this full-time job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, introduce yourself and explain why you are writing express your interest in having this full-time job explain why you think you are a suitable candidate for the post

You work as a part-time employee in a company. The company has recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this full-time job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, introduce yourself and explain why you are writing express your interest in having this full-time job explain why you think you are a suitable candidate for the post oR8p9
Dear Sir, My name is Aan Hill and I am a part-time employee at your Mechanical department. I am writing this letter to apply for a full-time CNC machinist position. Actually, I saw an advert on the notice board of the company which indicated that you are looking for a permanent for the CNC machinist. I would like to apply for this position because I have been working in this company for the last 1 year as a part-time CNC machine operator. On top of this, I recently completed my diploma in the field of Mechanical Engineering with 80% marks. I am familiar with this work and now I have almost 1-year of experience in this work. Besides, I also have good and friendly relations with all other workers. I hope you would like to hire me for this position based on my current role and experiences. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Aan Hill.
Dear Sir, My name is
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I am a part-time employee at your Mechanical department. I am writing this letter to apply for a full-time CNC machinist position. Actually, I
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saw
an advert on the notice board of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which indicated that you are looking for a permanent for the CNC machinist. I would like to apply for this position
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because
I have been working in this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for the last 1 year as a part-time CNC machine operator. On top of this, I recently completed my diploma in the field of Mechanical Engineering with 80% marks. I am familiar with this work and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I have almost 1-year of experience in this work.
Besides
, I
also
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and friendly relations with all other workers. I hope you would like to hire me for this position based on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
role and experiences. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
Sincerely
,
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Hill.

IELTS letter You work as a part-time employee in a company. The company has recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this full-time job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, introduce yourself and explain why you are writing express your interest in having this full-time job explain why you think you are a suitable candidate for the post

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