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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties RN5N8
Dear Dave, Hope this letter find you in radiant health and best spirit. I am writing this letter to requesting you to look after my house and my pet dog jimmy as, I am going on business trip for 5 days from 1st July to 5th July. I have already put all the food on dining table needed to feed my dog jimmy as he is allergic to fish so. He is quite so you do not need to worry about anything but, you need to take him out on his schedule time. I have wrote his schedule on note and stick on to fridge. I Forgot to mention about my plants which I have in my balcony, could you please pour little water once a day as they do not need more water also, you can keep lights on of the entrance. I have already bought all the groceries so you do not need to worry about that. You can also go and see the places near by my house there is one restaurant behind the main street they have amazing Chinese food. If you need anything from my side feel free to call me on my office number: 647-290-1609. Thank you very much, I am really appreciate your help. Yours truly, Vidhi Dave
Dear Dave,

Hope this letter find you in radiant health and best spirit. I am writing this letter to requesting you to look after my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and my pet dog jimmy as, I am going on business trip for 5 days from 1st July to 5th July.

I have already put all the food on dining table needed to feed my dog jimmy as he is allergic to fish
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
. He is quite
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so
you do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to worry about anything
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but
, you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to take him out on his schedule time. I have
Use past participle here: "written".
wrote
his schedule on note and stick on to fridge.

I Forgot to
Did you mean simply "mention my"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mention about my
plants which I have in my balcony, could you
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please
pour
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
water once a day as they do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
more water
also
, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
lights on of the entrance.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have already
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bought
all the groceries
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so
you do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to worry about that. You can
also
go and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the places
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
there is one restaurant behind the main street they have amazing Chinese food. If you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
anything from my side feel free to call me on my office number: 647-290-1609.

Thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much, I am
really
Consider using a past participle here: "appreciated".
appreciate
your
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help
.

Yours
truly
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vidhi
Dave
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IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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