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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference

You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference g5xy7
Hi Donald, I’m writing because we didn’t get a chance to talk after work on Friday and I need a favour. The conference I’ve been planning is coming up next week (on the topic of ‘The Use of Technology in Modern Education’ in case you forgot). It will take place at the Gem Plaza on the 23rd beginning at 10: 30 in the morning. One of our scheduled panelists on the benefits of incorporating social media had to cancel due to Covid-19 restrictions and my mind immediately turned to you. You’re an expert about these apps in your personal life but I’ve also noticed how you try to integrate social media platforms into your lessons. You would be part of the panel but no preparation is necessary. If you accept, then we will arrange for a taxi to pick you up for the conference at 9: 30 am. We will provide a speaker’s fee for the day and there is a ceremony after the event during which we will have dinner and you are of course invited. Please let me know if you would like to take part in this conference. Regards, Dave
Hi Donald,

I’m writing
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we didn’t
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get
a chance to talk after work on Friday and I need a
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favour
. The conference I’ve been planning is coming up
next
week (on the topic of ‘The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Use
of Technology in Modern Education’ in case you forgot). It will take place at the Gem Plaza on the 23rd beginning at 10: 30 in the morning.

One of our scheduled panelists on the benefits of incorporating social media had to cancel due to Covid-19 restrictions and my mind immediately turned to you. You’re an expert about these apps in your personal life
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but
I’ve
also
noticed how you try to integrate social media platforms into your lessons. You would be part of the panel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
no preparation is necessary.

If you accept, then we will arrange for a taxi to pick you up for the conference at 9: 30 am. We will provide a speaker’s fee for the day and there is a ceremony after the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
during which we will have dinner and you are
of course
invited.

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Please
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let
me know if you would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in this conference.

Regards,

Dave
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IELTS letter You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give presentation What arrangement will you do for this conference

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192 words
6.5
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