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You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation.

You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation. 7aWrA
To Whom It May Concern, My name is Van Thang Nguyen currently I am working at Yankee valley fine drycleaning and alteration this is located in the South East in Airdrie. In the earlier morning, I always garbage and the bin is too far from the work that is impossible for me as for the residents living there. Because recently the local council has some changes like the bin higher than before that someone is going to fall down anytime and it is a danger for their kids play around the bin. I think the local council would replace the first we used to cause it is convenient than the one we are using. I would appreciate it if the local council a range the time to change the regular bin for the resident there. I am looking forward to hearing you! Best regard, Van Nguyen
To Whom It May Concern, My name is Van
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Thang
Nguyen
currently
I am working at Yankee valley fine
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drycleaning
and alteration this
is located
in the South East in
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Airdrie
. In the earlier morning, I always garbage and the bin is too far from the work
that is
impossible for me as for the residents living there.
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Because
recently the local council has
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some
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changes
like the bin higher than
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before
that someone is going to fall down anytime and it is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
for their kids play around the bin. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the local council would replace the
first
we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to cause it is
Use "(convenient)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
convenient
than the one we are using. I would appreciate it if the local council a range the time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the regular bin for the resident there.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to hearing you!
A determiner is probably missing here: "the Best".
Best
Did you mean "regards"?
regard
, Van
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Nguyen

IELTS letter You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation.

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