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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job pRXLm
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Wilson, I am John Smith residing in Melbourne province of Australia. The purpose of writing this letter in the response of your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper. I have read the information in the editorial by yesterday. You need a German language trainer for your kids. As being a tutor of the same language I would like to teach to your kids. There are two main reasons for which I believe I am perfect for the position. The primary one, I am native speaker of this language and it is now ten years that I am giving the coaching for the same. Furthermore, I run my own coaching centre and provide the certification as well. This certification is not only valid in the Australia but also world-wide. As my agency is certified with the global education system, the validation of this certificate is accepted anywhere in the world. I know the problem of non native speaker and cope up with the classmates during the primary session. Although, I am earning well, this work is for charity to those who wants to learn language at a discounted price. Look for a positive response from your side. Yours truly, John Smith.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Wilson,

I am John Smith residing in Melbourne province of Australia. The purpose of writing this letter in the response of your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper.

I have read the information in the editorial by yesterday. You need a German
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
trainer for your kids.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
being a tutor of the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
I would like to teach to your kids. There are two main reasons for which I believe I am perfect for the position. The primary one, I
Please check whether an article is missing: "am a native" or "am an native"
am native
speaker of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
ten years that I am giving the coaching for the same.
Furthermore
, I run my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
coaching
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centre
and provide the certification
as well
. This certification is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
valid in the Australia
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
world-wide. As my agency
is certified
with the global education system, the validation of this certificate is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
anywhere in the world.

I know the problem of
It appears that a hyphen is missing.
non native
speaker and cope up with the classmates during the primary session. Although, I am earning well, this work is for charity to those who wants to learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
at a discounted price.

Look for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from your side.

Yours
truly
,

John Smith.
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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