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You live in a high-rise building, which has a communal laundry room. Sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machines and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. You think the building management should purchase 10 extra laundry baskets and make them available for such times, so the machines can be freed up.

You live in a high-rise building, which has a communal laundry room. Sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machines and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. You think the building management should purchase 10 extra laundry baskets and make them available for such times, so the machines can be freed up. VBEB6
Dear Mr. Watson, My name is Gucci and I have been living at your building in apartment 27 for the last 3 years. I would like to say that I enjoy living in this place all these years without any major problem. However, I am writing this letter to bring yours on an important issue. Actually, This problem is related to the laundry machines because people have to wait for long time periods in order to use the washers and dryer. Most of the time all the laundry machines are full of other residences' clothes because many people do not come on time to pick up their dry clothes from dryers. I would like to suggest that if you could provide a few extra laundry buckets, so people can empty the washer and dryer in these buckets if it, s full with someone's clothes. This will help to improve the situation and save the valuable time of residences.
Dear Mr. Watson, My name is Gucci and I have been living at your building in apartment 27 for the last 3 years. I would like to say that I enjoy living in this place all these years without any major problem.
However
, I am writing this letter to bring yours on an
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important
issue. Actually, This problem
is related
to the laundry machines
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because
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people
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have to
wait for long
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time
periods in order to
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use
the washers and dryer. Most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
all the laundry machines are full of other residences' clothes
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because
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many
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people
do not
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come
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to pick up their dry clothes from dryers. I would like to suggest that if you could provide a few extra laundry buckets,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can empty the washer and dryer in these buckets if it, s
The usual collocation for "full" is "of" not "with". Did you mean "full of"?
full with
someone's clothes. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the situation and save the valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
of residences.

IELTS letter You live in a high-rise building, which has a communal laundry room. Sometimes people don't come in time to empty the machines and other residents have to wait for a washer or dryer. You think the building management should purchase 10 extra laundry baskets and make them available for such times, so the machines can be freed up.

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