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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. v. 3

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. v. 3 JoKo0
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing a letter about my important documents which are forget in your hotel. It is very essential papers. Let me explain my situation in full detail. Actually, two days ago, I came in your hotel. Hotel name was ''Moonlight''. This hotel was very beautiful and conference hall was very large and air conditioner. I stayed here in 20th march to 21th march 2021 and room number 611. After some rest, I attended my meeting around 2pm. After completed my meeting, I returned in my room at 5pm. Next day, I came in my city. That time, I had no idea. I left my crucial papers in that room. When I came in my home then I checked and noticed some documents were not in my file. This papers were related my company and written some notes on there. Please find my paper on that room. If you find my official papers then send me on my address. On the contrary, I will give you some rewards. My phone number is 2244556630. I hope you understand my condition. Thank you, Yours faithfully, 456
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing a letter about my
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important
documents which are
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forget
in your
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hotel
. It is
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very
essential papers.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in full detail. Actually, two days ago, I came in your
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hotel
.
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Hotel
name was ''Moonlight''. This
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hotel
was
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very
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beautiful
and conference hall was
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very
large and air conditioner. I stayed here in 20th march to
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21th
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march
2021 and room number 611. After
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some
rest, I attended my meeting around 2pm. After completed my meeting, I returned in my room at 5pm.
Next
day, I came in my city. That time, I had no
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idea
. I
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left
my crucial papers in that room.

When I came in my home then I
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checked
and noticed
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some
documents were not in my file.
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This
papers
were related
my
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company
and written
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some
notes on there.
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Please
find my paper on that room. If you find my official papers then
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send
me on my address.
On the contrary
, I will give you
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some
rewards. My phone number is 2244556630. I hope you understand my condition. Thank you, Yours
faithfully
, 456
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. v. 3

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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