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You work as a part time employee in a company. The company recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this job.

You work as a part time employee in a company. The company recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this job. 0JX9
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in reference to the advertised full-time job position. I have been working in the firm as a part-time employee for last 6 months. I recently came across your advertisement in the local newspaper and would like to apply for the same. Talking about my qualification, I complete my bachelors in Computer Science and have relevant experience of 2 years. I believe my education and experience totally align with your requirements. Moreover, I have been working in your organization therefore, I am completely aware about the work culture and ethics. I assure you to become to a great addition for your team. Looking forward for a positive response. Yours faithfully, Emily Brown
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in reference to the advertised full-time job position. I have been working in the firm as a part-time employee for last 6 months. I recently came across your advertisement in the local newspaper and would like to apply for the same.

Talking about my qualification, I complete my bachelors in Computer Science and have relevant experience of 2 years. I believe my education and experience
totally
align with your requirements.
Moreover
, I have been working in your organization
therefore
, I am completely aware about the work culture and ethics.

I assure you to become to a great addition for your team. Looking forward for a
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positive
response. Yours
faithfully
, Emily
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Brown
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IELTS letter You work as a part time employee in a company. The company recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this job.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
119 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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