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You work as a part time employee in a company. The company recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this job.

You work as a part time employee in a company. The company recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this job. 0JX9

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in reference to the advertised full-time job position. I have been working in the firm as a part-time employee for last 6 months. I recently came across your advertisement in the local newspaper and would like to apply for the same. Talking about my qualification, I complete my bachelors in Computer Science and have relevant experience of 2 years. I believe my education and experience totally align with your requirements. Moreover, I have been working in your organization therefore, I am completely aware about the work culture and ethics. I assure you to become to a great addition for your team. Looking forward for a positive response. Yours faithfully, Emily Brown

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in reference to the advertised full-time job position. I have been working in the firm as a part-time employee for last 6 months. I recently came across your advertisement in the local newspaper and would like to apply for the same.

Talking about my qualification, I complete my bachelors in Computer Science and have relevant experience of 2 years. I believe my education and experience totally
 align with your requirements. Moreover
, I have been working in your organization therefore
, I am completely aware about the work culture and ethics.

I assure you to become to a great addition for your team. Looking forward for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response. Yours faithfully
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IELTS letter You work as a part time employee in a company. The company recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this job.

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

119 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 7.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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