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You work as a manager in trade company and made mistake with assignments.This mistake became a problem in your company.you should write apology letter to your president for your mistake

You work as a manager in trade company and made mistake with assignments. This mistake became a problem in your company. you should write apology letter to your president for your mistake eeRa7
Dear SirI am writing this letter to apologise for the mistake which I made last week. I know this confusing situation caused to problem between your company any customer which is trading sucessfully for 2 years. I am not going to justify self, but I consider I must exlpain my condition in that day. I applied for this job only a month ago. Unfortunately mr Jefferson who was main manager didn't come to the office due to the illness he was suffering. So I had to work as a main manager despite I have no enough experience on this occupation. As a result I confused some documents which was important for the company. I am really sorry for what I did by mistake. In order soften the situation I sent the correct assignment to the clients and asked my apology from customers as well. I would appriciate it if you could give me one more chance to show myself sucessfullyIn your company. I promise this mistake will not be repeated any more. I hope you will accept my sincere apology and will let me to know your reaction to my letter. Yours faithfully Solih
Dear
SirI
am
writing this letter to
apologise
for the mistake which I made last week. I know this confusing situation caused to problem between your
company
any customer which is trading
sucessfully
for 2 years. I am not going to justify self,
but
I consider I
must
exlpain
my condition in that day.
I
applied for this job
only
a month ago. Unfortunately
mr
Jefferson who was main manager didn't
come
to the office due to the illness he was suffering.
So
I had to work as a main manager despite I have no
enough
experience on this occupation.
As a result
I confused
some
documents which was
important
for the
company
. I am
really
sorry for what I did by mistake. In order soften the situation I
sent
the correct assignment to the clients and asked my apology from customers
as well
. I would
appriciate
it if you could give me one more chance to
show
myself
sucessfullyIn
your
company
. I promise this mistake will not
be repeated
any more
.
I
hope you will accept my sincere apology and will
let
me to know your reaction to my letter. Yours
faithfully
Solih
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IELTS letter You work as a manager in trade company and made mistake with assignments. This mistake became a problem in your company. you should write apology letter to your president for your mistake

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
193 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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