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You recently stayed in the hospital for a week. However, you forgot an important object. Write a letter to the hospital manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and state your medical problem. • Describe the item and where you left it. • Explain what action you would like the hospital to take.

You recently stayed in the hospital for a week. However, you forgot an important object. Write a letter to the hospital manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and state your medical problem. • Describe the item and where you left it. • Explain what action you would like the hospital to take. XnVB8
Dear Sir or Mam, I am ABC from kitchener and was admitted in your hospital from last few days after suffering from a migrane attack. Through this letter I want to make a request as I have forgotten my wallet and a diary in the room no. 786. Yesterday while checking out of the hospital, I didnot realised my belongings were missing until I reached my house travelling 100 kms. Although there is nothing as such an expensive stuff I have left behind, but my dairy is quite crucial as I have collected the related addresses gradually. Can you please ask your house keeping staff to have a look into the room and if they could find black LV wallet along with pink pocket diary. I would be much thankful for this act. Further, I would need your assistance if the hospital administration can send these articles through courier and the delivery charges would be settled up by me. My address is 50 pinnacle drive, kitchener, N2P0H8. Your help would be much appreciated in my circumstances where I am unable to travel back. Thanks Yours truely ABC
Dear Sir or Mam,

I am ABC from
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kitchener
and
was admitted
in your hospital from last few days after suffering from a
Possible spelling mistake found.
migrane
attack. Through this letter I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a request as I have forgotten my wallet and a diary in the room no. 786.

Yesterday while checking out of the hospital, I
Possible spelling mistake found.
didnot
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
my belongings were missing until I reached my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
travelling 100
Possible spelling mistake found.
kms
. Although there is nothing as such an expensive stuff I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
behind,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
my dairy is quite crucial as I have collected the related addresses
gradually
. Can you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
ask your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
keeping staff to have a look into the room and if they could find black LV wallet along with pink pocket diary. I would be much thankful for this act.

Further
, I would need your assistance if the hospital administration can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
these articles through courier and the delivery charges would
be settled
up by me. My address is 50 pinnacle drive,
Possible spelling mistake found.
kitchener
, N2P0H8. Your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
would be much appreciated in my circumstances where I am unable to travel back.

Thanks

Yours
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truely


ABC

IELTS letter You recently stayed in the hospital for a week. However, you forgot an important object. Write a letter to the hospital manager. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and state your medical problem. • Describe the item and where you left it. • Explain what action you would like the hospital to take.

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