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You have recently bought a cassete player but it does not wok properly

You have recently bought a cassete player but it does not wok properly 25r8o

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the cassette player which I recently bought from you shop. On the 21st of December, I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a cassette player for my son's birthday. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and asked a shop assistant about it. After I got all information, I decided to purchase it. Two days later my child said to me about the problems of the item. When he used it for the first time, it worked properly. Even he learnt two English songs with the help of it. Next time, when he put on it, its sound was very low. In addition to this, it did not read the cassette. I would like you to replace the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately, l will force to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your faithfully, Kate Wilson.

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the cassette player which I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. On the 21st of December, I visited one of your local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a cassette player for my son's birthday. Looking around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and asked a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant about it. After I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 all information, I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Two days later my child said to me about the problems of the item. When he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 it for the first
 time, it worked properly
. Even he Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 two English songs with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of it. Next
 time, when he put on it, its sound was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 low. In addition
 to this, it did not read the cassette. I would like you to replace the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately, l will force to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, Kate Wilson. 