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You have recently bought a vacuum cleaner but it does not work properly.

You have recently bought a vacuum cleaner but it does not work properly. 95rLx

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the vacuum cleaner which l bought from your shop. On the 21st of December, l visited one of your local shops in order to buy a vacuum cleaner. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and asked a shop assistant about it. After I got all information, I decided to purchase it. Although the machine was supposed to clean everything, for the first time I used to clean only carpets. Furthermore, when I tried to use its extra filter it did not work at all. I sent the item to the shop after having been assured one of the assistants that I would be send a refund. In addition, I still have not received one. I would like you to replace the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately, I will force to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, Kate Wilson.

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the vacuum cleaner which l This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. On the 21st of December, l visited one of your local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a vacuum cleaner. Looking around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and asked a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant about it. After I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 all information, I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Although the machine was supposed
 to clean everything, for the first
 time I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to clean This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 carpets. Furthermore
, when I tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 its extra filter it did not work at all. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 the item to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 after having been assured
 one of the assistants that I would be Consider using the past participle "sent"?sent
send
 a refund. In addition
, I still
 have not received one. I would like you to replace the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately, I will force to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully
, Kate Wilson. 