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Letter for nanny job for a six-year-old baby in Australia

Letter for nanny job for a six-year-old baby in Australia RkyKo
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my enthusiasm for a nanny job which is your requirement. I have seen an article in an Australian magazine that you are in search of a caretaker for your six-year-old child who can stay with your family in Australia for a short span. In this regard, I would like to show my obsession with children. I like spending my leisure time with them as I feel jubilant by playing with them. I also have two years of experience as a professional nanny in Singapore. Additionally, I have completed a short duration nanny course from an esteemed and renowned university. Consequently, I believe that my experiences and skills meet the requirements of this profile and make me the best fit for the same job. I will read good and knowledgeable books during my idle time and certainly share my knowledge with your kid which would be helpful and informative. Lastly, I would have an opportunity to explore iconic and exquisite places of the new country and would be able to learn new customs of your country if I get selected. Looking forward to a positive response from your end. Yours sincerely, Charanjeet kaur
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my enthusiasm for a nanny job which is your requirement. I have
seen
an article in an Australian magazine that you are in search of a caretaker for your six-year-
old
child who can stay with your family in Australia for a short span.

In this regard, I would like to
show
my obsession with children. I like spending my leisure time with them as I feel jubilant by playing with them. I
also
have two years of experience as a professional nanny in Singapore.
Additionally
, I have completed a short duration nanny course from an esteemed and renowned university.
Consequently
, I believe that my experiences and
skills
meet
the requirements of this profile and
make
me the best fit for the same job. I will read
good
and knowledgeable books during my idle time and
certainly
share my knowledge with your kid which would be helpful and informative.
Lastly
, I would have an opportunity to explore iconic and exquisite places of the new country and would be able to learn new customs of your country if I
get
selected.

Looking forward to a
positive
response from your
end
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Charanjeet
kaur
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IELTS letter Letter for nanny job for a six-year-old baby in Australia

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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