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Write&a&letter&of&complaint&to&a&company&outlining&a&problem& you&had&while&visiting&one&of&their&stores.&In&your&letter&include: Ȉ what*the*problem*was Ȉ why*this*problem*has*upset*you Ȉ what*you*want*to*happen*as*a*result*of*your*letter*

Write&a&letter&of&complaint&to&a&company&outlining&a&problem& you&had&while&visiting&one&of&their&stores. &In&your&letter&include: Ȉ what*the*problem*was Ȉ why*this*problem*has*upset*you Ȉ what*you*want*to*happen*as*a*result*of*your*letter* d5q6E
Dear Sir/Madam, I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner in which you stage your products. Allow me to elaborate. Last week, while shopping at your west end location, I noticed that your center was playing an extremely graphic movie to demonstrate the visual capabilities of a new television model. The day I was in your store, my children were exposed to the violence you allowed to be screened. I am aware children are not your company’s target market, but you have to acknowledge that they do visit your stores regularly with their parents. I trust you can empathize with my situation. Thus, I am expecting you to take immediate action by changing the material you use in your displays. I am also expecting you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen. Your timely attention to this matter is needed, Ryan
Dear Sir/Madam,

I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner

in which you stage your products.
Allow
me to elaborate.

Last week, while shopping at your west
end
location, I noticed that your

center was playing an
extremely
graphic movie to demonstrate the

visual capabilities of a new television model. The day I was in your store,

my children
were exposed
to the violence you
allowed
to
be screened
. I

am aware children are not your
company
’s target market,
but
you have

to acknowledge that they do visit your stores
regularly
with their

parents.

I trust you can empathize with my situation.
Thus
, I am expecting you to

take immediate action by changing the material you
use
in your displays. I am
also
expecting you to reprimand the members of your team

responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen.

Your timely attention to this matter
is needed
,

Ryan
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IELTS letter Write&a&letter&of&complaint&to&a&company&outlining&a&problem& you&had&while&visiting&one&of&their&stores. &In&your&letter&include: Ȉ what*the*problem*was Ȉ why*this*problem*has*upset*you Ȉ what*you*want*to*happen*as*a*result*of*your*letter*

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