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Write a letter to a friend.you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.Apologize for damaging the product.Explain what happened.Say how are you going to fix the issue

Write a letter to a friend. you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Apologize for damaging the product. Explain what happened. Say how are you going to fix the issue pG7w
Dear Manu, Sorry it's taken so long time to write to you, but at last I put pen to paper to explain why I haven't returned the DIY book I borrowed from you. To be honest, I have been feeling guilty that I delayed in writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged your book. I am extremely sorry. I know very well that how important the book is to you as it was passed down from your late father. Actually what happened is that I was reading on the chapter about DIY Plumbing when I knocked over my cup of coffee which was splashed all over the book. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time. I have sent it for repairing. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, the book will be as good as a new when I get it back. Once again, extremely sorry for damaging the book. I will send it to you once I get it back. I hope you can forgive me. Best Wishes, Lavanya
Dear
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Manu
, Sorry it's taken
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long time to write to you,
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but
at last I put pen to paper to
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explain
why I haven't returned the DIY
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book
I borrowed from you. To be honest, I have been feeling guilty that I delayed in writing to you. I
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have to
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own
up that I damaged your
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book
. I am
extremely
sorry.
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I
know
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very
well that how
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important
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
is to you as it
was passed
down from your late father. Actually what happened is that I was reading on the chapter about DIY Plumbing when I knocked over my cup of coffee which
was splashed
all over the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
it for repairing. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
will be as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
as a new when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it back. Once again,
extremely
sorry for damaging the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it to you once I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it back. I hope you can forgive me.

Best Wishes,
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Lavanya

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend. you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Apologize for damaging the product. Explain what happened. Say how are you going to fix the issue

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  American English
2 paragraphs
185 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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