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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, P26p
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Suresh and I recently arranged all-day meeting for my organization in your restaurant. It was held on last Friday the meet was went well and all of office colleagues are very happy because the meeting hall arrangements and the interior design, the front officers managed very well and mainly the welcoming drink, it was so nice everyone appreciated. Everything went well, unfortunately I was unhappy with the food that was served for afternoon. The rice and veg gravy was cooked properly but the chicken gravy was not cooked well and the taste was not good to eat. I am sharing my opinion with you to take some steps and to arrange someone in order to monitor food processing section before it going to serve so that you could avoid in future. I am looking for your response in positive way. Yours Faithfully, Suresh Thandapani
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Suresh and I recently arranged all-day meeting for my organization in your restaurant. It
was held
on last Friday the
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meet
was
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went
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well
and
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all of office
colleagues are
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very
happy
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because
the meeting hall arrangements and the interior design, the front officers managed
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very
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well
and
mainly
the welcoming drink, it was
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so
nice everyone appreciated.

Everything went
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well
, unfortunately I was unhappy with the food that
was served
for afternoon. The rice and veg gravy
was cooked
properly
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but
the chicken gravy was not cooked
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well
and the taste was not
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good
to eat.

I am sharing my opinion with you to take
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some
steps and to arrange someone in order to monitor food processing section
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before
it going to serve
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so
that you could avoid
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. I am looking for your response in
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positive
way.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Suresh
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Thandapani

IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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