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Reading comics only rot the children's mind than to provide any good education.

Reading comics only rot the children's mind than to provide any good education. YpL5
"Books are to the mind what exercise is to the body' were some inspiring words said by Sir Richard Steele. Books are portals to transport our minds to new worlds, into the mind of people or even sometimes remind us of our own experiences. Sometimes we need to find words to things we already know or to give perspective and shape to our feelings we can't say out loud. Comic books are a great way to get children into the habit of reading. They not only have easy language, but also have captivating art which grabs their attention and keeps them hooked. There are comic books that impart not only knowledge but also good manners and morals. In conclusion, I feel that comic books are a great beginning in the journey of a child's reading habit. I believe that they can be a great sources of entertainment and knowledege if the content is supervised and managed wisely
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IELTS letter Reading comics only rot the children's mind than to provide any good education.

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