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You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start

You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start k8RK

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my sincere interest for a part time job at your golf club. My name is Mr. John Wood. I live in London, United Kingdom. I am a retired professional golfer and a certified golf coach as well. I have more than 18 years of extensive experience in golf which includes coaching at all levels, mentorship and high-performance analyst as well. Currently, I am on short consultant stint with one of the golf club in Dublin, Ireland and the contract is due to end tomorrow. In addition to the above, I was awarded with Grade “A” coach certificate in golf, which is regarded as the highest certificate for any golf coach in our country. Moreover, I possess a high-performance analyst certificate which qualifies me to analyse players technical flaws. Furthermore, I have also worked as a mental conditioning coach for various franchisees. I request you to consider all the above credentials and employ me for this temporary role, I can be a part of your golf club soon after receiving the offer based upon your convenience. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Wood

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my sincere interest for a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 job at your golf club.

My name is Mr. John Wood. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in London, United Kingdom. I am a retired professional golfer and a certified golf You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainerteachermentor
coach
as well
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have more than 18 years of extensive experience in golf which includes coaching at all levels, mentorship and high-performance analyst as well
. Currently
, I am on short consultant stint with one of the golf club in Dublin, Ireland and the contract is due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 tomorrow.

In addition
 to the above, I was awarded
 with Grade “A” You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainerteachermentor
coach
 certificate in golf, which is regarded
 as the highest certificate for any golf You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainerteachermentor
coach
 in our country. Moreover
, I possess a high-performance analyst certificate which qualifies me to Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.analyze
analyse
 players technical flaws. Furthermore
, I have also
 worked as a mental conditioning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrainerteachermentor
coach
 for various franchisees.

I request you to consider all the above credentials and employ me for this temporary role, I can be a part of your golf club This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 after receiving the offer based upon your convenience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

John Wood