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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away npjo
Dear Rahul, I am writing you to request time off from work. Since past few days I have been having shoulders pain issues. Let me explain to you in details it all started a week ago when I lifted the heavy box of clear out confectionary items. I really thought it was very minor at that time, but it have been getting worst and worst. So I am requesting if you please give me leave off about 1 week. Although, i would be away at the time you do not have to be worried about my work, as i have completed all the paper work for next week.
Dear Rahul,

I am writing you to request time off from work.
Since
past few days I have been having shoulders pain issues.

Let
me
explain
to you in
details
it all
started
a week ago when I lifted the heavy box of
clear
out confectionary items. I
really
thought
it was
very
minor at that time,
but
it
have
been getting worst and worst.
So
I am requesting if you
please
give me
leave
off about 1 week.

Although,
i
would be away at the time you do not
have to
be worried
about my work, as
i
have completed all the paper work for
next
week.
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
108 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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