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You need a new accommodation. Write a letter to the manager who you rent your flat from and explain: - Why your family need a new accommodation- When you want to move- How you would like your new accommodation v

You need a new accommodation. Write a letter to the manager who you rent your flat from and explain: - Why your family need a new accommodation- When you want to move- How you would like your new accommodation v 38Qm
Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter about the new saerch of an apartment, actually my wife and i are uuerntl living in the the third unit in the house 233. We are living here from last two here consequently this apartment is not spacious anymore after having new born baby and with my mother- in-law. therefore, we are looking for atleast 3 bedroom set apartment near by this house that should must have the current utilitilies as i am paying for like as gas, internet and water facilities. our familiy is satistified with your previous services so far. And we like the area and surronding here. we would like to move on the 1 dec as from now we have 2 months to lookup the same place. let us know if you could help us to find the relevent palce. we would really appreciate your options. yours faithfully, aroma
Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter about the new
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saerch
of an apartment, actually my wife and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
are
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uuerntl
living in
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.
the the
third unit in the
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house
233. We are living here from last two here
consequently
this apartment is not spacious anymore after having new born baby and with my mother- in-law.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
therefore
, we are looking for
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atleast
3 bedroom set
Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: "apartments".
apartment
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
this
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house
that should
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must
have the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
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utilitilies
as
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am paying for like as gas, internet and water facilities.
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our
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familiy
is
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satistified
with your previous services
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so
far. And we like the area and
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surronding
here.
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we
would like to
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move
on the 1
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dec
as from
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now
we have 2 months to lookup the same place.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
let
us know if you could
In informal texts, 'to' is not necessary. Do you mean "help us find"?
help us to find
the
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relevent
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palce
.
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we
would
really
appreciate your options.
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yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
aroma

IELTS letter You need a new accommodation. Write a letter to the manager who you rent your flat from and explain: - Why your family need a new accommodation- When you want to move- How you would like your new accommodation v

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  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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