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You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. v. 1 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to get some details about accommodation in Sydney that your agency can arrange for me. I have been accepted at Macquarie University in a research-based Master's degree programme, and I will start my classes from next June. I will stay there for one year and my wife will accompany me during my stay there. Therefore, I need a separate accommodation than the one the university has offered me in its residence hall. I am looking for a studio apartment that will not cost me more than $1500 per month and is located within the walking distance from the university. It would be ideal if the apartment comes with a fully equipped kitchen and fully furnished rooms with windows that allow natural light and fresh air. It would be a bonus if we can access shopping malls, markets, a park and other public amenities w

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. v. 1 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to get some details about accommodation in Sydney that your agency can arrange for me. I have been accepted at Macquarie University in a research-based Master's degree programme, and I will start my classes from next June. I will stay there for one year and my wife will accompany me during my stay there. Therefore, I need a separate accommodation than the one the university has offered me in its residence hall. I am looking for a studio apartment that will not cost me more than $1500 per month and is located within the walking distance from the university. It would be ideal if the apartment comes with a fully equipped kitchen and fully furnished rooms with windows that allow natural light and fresh air. It would be a bonus if we can access shopping malls, markets, a park and other public amenities w 7bGY
Dear sir/Madam, My name is Divya Shah. I want to get some information about 1 BHK apartment near by downtown, toronto area. I have been accepted by the seneca college for one year certificate program which starts from 2nd april 2021. I am planning to travel on 28th march 2021 to canada so need accommodation from 29th march 2021 to one year. I do not have such a requirement but it should be near by grocery store and metro station which i can easily avail whenever i want. I will be travelling there with kitchen utensils so no requirement of the same but just want to have double bad with one balcony in the house. Furthermore, I have maximum budget of 1000cad per month. Looking forward to hear from you. Thanks and regards, Divya shah
Dear sir/Madam, My name is Divya Shah. I want to
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BHK
apartment
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near by
downtown,
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toronto
area.

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accepted
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college for one year certificate program which
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april
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I
am planning to travel on 28th
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canada
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need accommodation from 29th
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march
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I
do not have such a requirement
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it should be
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near by
grocery store and metro station which
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i
can
easily
avail whenever
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i
want.
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will be travelling there with kitchen utensils
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no requirement of the same
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want to have double
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with one balcony in the
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Furthermore
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Looking forward
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to hear
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Thanks and regards, Divya shah
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IELTS letter You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. v. 1 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to get some details about accommodation in Sydney that your agency can arrange for me. I have been accepted at Macquarie University in a research-based Master's degree programme, and I will start my classes from next June. I will stay there for one year and my wife will accompany me during my stay there. Therefore, I need a separate accommodation than the one the university has offered me in its residence hall. I am looking for a studio apartment that will not cost me more than $1500 per month and is located within the walking distance from the university. It would be ideal if the apartment comes with a fully equipped kitchen and fully furnished rooms with windows that allow natural light and fresh air. It would be a bonus if we can access shopping malls, markets, a park and other public amenities w

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