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You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. 1OQL

Dear Sir or Madam, I have been accepted to an exchange program at University of Sciences, Paris. The university has suggested contacting your agency for accommodation. I would be requiring an accommodation for 1 year from March 2021 till February 2022. Since I would prefer to have the place to my myself, I would request for an individual housing. It can be a studio or a room in a student's hostel, equipped with bathroom and toilet facilities, a kitchen, wi-fi, and no more than 30 minutes from the university. My budget is 450€-500€/month. Enclosed is my letter of acceptance to the university. My contact details are listed below. Please let me know if I should provide any additional information. Yours sincerely, Amit Encl: Acceptance letter from University of Sciences, Paris Personal Details Name: Amit Mangotra Email: amit. mangotra@gmail. com Address: 1 Beverly Park Gurgaon 122002 India

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 to an exchange program at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
University
 of Sciences, Paris. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
 has suggested contacting your agency for accommodation.

I would be requiring Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".accommodation
an accommodation
 for 1 year from March 2021 till February 2022. Since I would prefer to have the place to my myself, I would request for

an individual housing. It can be a studio or a room in a student's hostel, equipped with bathroom and toilet facilities, a kitchen, Possible spelling mistake found.Wi-FiWiFiWIFIhi-fi
wi-fi
, and no more than

30 minutes from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
. My budget is The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€450".€450
450€
-The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "€500".€500
500€
/month.

Enclosed is my letter of acceptance to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
university
. My contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
are listed
 below. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if I should provide any additional information.

Yours sincerely
,

Amit

Encl: Acceptance letter from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
University
 of Sciences, Paris

Personal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
Details


Name: Amit Possible spelling mistake found.MantraAngoraMingora
Mangotra


Email: Possible spelling mistake found.AmitadmitamidemitomitAIT
amit
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMangotra@gmail
mangotra@gmail
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com


Address: 1 Beverly
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphPark.Park!Park?Park:Park,Park;
Park


Gurgaon 122002

India