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ou live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

ou live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. NbQj
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my desire to volunteer as an English teacher in any one of the developing countries. I hod Masters degree in English language and I have been working as a senior English teacher at a public school for eight years. As you know, the summer vacations are drawing closer and I am planning to spend those two months in a developing nation teaching English to poor and destitute children. I have always wanted to volunteer but never got an opportunity. After seeing your advertisement I searched online about your programmes and I have decided that I want to volunteer in an African country. Let me know if you have any openings there. If that is not possible, you can send me to any other country. I am available from the start of May until the end of June. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, XYZ
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my desire to volunteer as an English teacher in any one of the
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developing countries
.
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I hod
For an academic degree, use "Master’s".
Masters
degree in English language and I have been working as a senior English teacher at a public school for eight years.

As you know, the summer vacations are drawing closer and I am planning to spend those two months in a developing nation teaching English to poor and destitute children. I have always wanted to volunteer
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but
never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
an opportunity. After seeing your advertisement I searched online about your
Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.
programmes
and I have decided that I want to volunteer in an African country.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know if you have any openings there. If
that is
not possible, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me to any other country. I am available from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
of May until the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of June.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

XYZ

IELTS letter ou live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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