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You recently attended a meeting at hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter - [ ] Say where you think you have left the papers - [ ] Explain why they are so important - [ ] Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

You recently attended a meeting at hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter - [ ] Say where you think you have left the papers - [ ] Explain why they are so important - [ ] Tell the manager what you want him/her to do A7Vn
Dear Manager, I am writing this letter to show my concern regarding the papers I have left at your hotel. Yesterday I visit your hotel for career counselling session which was held on second floor in the evening. I was carrying all the important papers like schools certificate, birth certificate, character certificate and Aadhaar card. After the session is completed I visited the hotel’s food court. I was sitting at the entrance table of the court and I think there only I have left all the papers. I got a mail from college that I got shortlisted for the admission and the last date to submit all the documents is tomorrow evening. This is my dream college I don’t want to lose this chance. Hope you understand that’s why it’s really urgent to get those documents. I request you to get those documents from the food court and keep it with you only. I will visit the hotel tomorrow morning and will collect the documents from you. Kindly let me know the timings when you are available in the morning. I apologise to bother you a lot. Request you to kindly understand its urgency. Yours Faithfully Surbhi
Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to
show
my concern regarding the papers I have
left
at your
hotel
. Yesterday I visit your
hotel
for career counselling session which
was held
on second floor in the evening. I was carrying all the
important
papers like schools certificate, birth certificate, character certificate and Aadhaar card.

After
the session
is completed
I visited the
hotel’s
food court. I was sitting at the entrance table of the court and I
think
there
only
I have
left
all the papers.

I
got
a mail from college that I
got
shortlisted for the admission and the last date to submit all the documents is tomorrow evening. This is my dream college I don’t want to lose this chance. Hope you understand that’s why it’s
really
urgent to
get
those documents.

I request you to
get
those documents from the food court and
keep
it with you
only
. I will visit the
hotel
tomorrow morning and will collect the documents from you. Kindly
let
me know the timings when you are available in the morning.

I
apologise
to bother you a lot. Request you to kindly understand its urgency.

Yours
Faithfully


Surbhi
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter - [ ] Say where you think you have left the papers - [ ] Explain why they are so important - [ ] Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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