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You have received a job offer for an exciting, new position. Although you are expected to start on September 7th, you are only available to start a week later due to personal reasons. Write a letter to your new boss. In your letter: Express your enthusiasm for the job offer Explain the problem Suggest what you can do.

You have received a job offer for an exciting, new position. Although you are expected to start on September 7th, you are only available to start a week later due to personal reasons. Write a letter to your new boss. In your letter: Express your enthusiasm for the job offer Explain the problem Suggest what you can do. qJr5

Dear Ms. Mcllwain, I am writing this letter regarding incapacity to join from next month, In the light of the fact that I have been the new recruitment for the post of project compliance manger. With immense joy and happiness I would like to let you know that this position will be a milestone in my carrier. It will enhance my horizon in the field, More over the experience will further alleviate my confidence. All the challenges I am going to face at work will make more motivated to do better. It would be a honor to work for your esteemed company. Sir let me explain my situation, My mother is known case of Asthma, due to seasonal change her symptoms have been aggravated. Doctor advised her one week rest and should kept at home under supervision. I am the only domestic help she can have for now on. So most tentatively I can began working on 14th September, instead of 7th September. In the mean time I can work from home during my absence, All the calls related to me can be deviated to my resident connection, more over can have a brief meeting in the morning with my staff regarding the daily work task and summary at the end of the working time. I hope all these essential steps will prevent the new project from lagging. I await a positive response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours fatihfully

Dear Ms. Possible spelling mistake found.McClainMcSwain
Mcllwain
, I am writing this letter regarding incapacity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 from next
 month, In the light of the fact that I have been the new recruitment for the post of project compliance manger.

With immense joy and happiness I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that this position will be a milestone in my carrier. It will enhance my horizon in the field, More over the experience will further
 alleviate my confidence. All the challenges I am going to face at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 more motivated to do better. It would be Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 honor to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 for your esteemed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

Sir This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my situation, My mother is known
 case of Asthma, due to seasonal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 her symptoms have been aggravated
. Doctor advised her When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-week"one-week
one week
 rest and should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "keep"keep
kept
 at home under supervision. I am the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 domestic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 she can have for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 on. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 most tentatively
 I can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "begin"begin
began
 working on 14th September, instead
 of 7th September.

In the Did you mean "meantime" (=the period of time between two things)?meantime
mean time
 I can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 from home during my absence, All the calls related to me can be deviated
 to my resident connection, more over can have a brief meeting in the morning with my staff regarding the daily You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 task and summary at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the working time. I hope all these essential steps will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the new project from lagging. I await a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.faithfully
fatihfully