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You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. B2Kj
Dear Ruta, It has been so long since we last were in touch. I hope all is well. I am writing to inform you about the house I recently purchased. After a long wait and search finally I found a house which met all my requirements. The house is spacious Bungalow with three bedrooms and a balcony with beautiful sea view. It has a large kitchen and lounge area too. In addition it also has a garden area where I have planted plethora of fruit and vegetable plants. It also has separate car park. Its basically located on east street in Newlynn suburb which is the central haeart of the town and at a walking distance from Lynn Mall. I would be glad if we can meet at my place for a dinner this weekend. Hope to see you soonBest Wishes Nisha
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Ruta
, It has been
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long since we last were in touch. I hope all is well. I am writing to inform you about the
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house
I recently
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purchased
. After a long wait and search
finally
I found a
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house
which met all my requirements. The
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house
is spacious Bungalow with three bedrooms and a balcony with
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beautiful
sea view. It has a large kitchen and lounge area too. In
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also
has a garden area where I have planted plethora of fruit and vegetable plants. It
also
has separate car park. Its
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located on east street in
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Newlynn
suburb which is the central
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haeart
of the town and at a walking distance from Lynn Mall. I would be glad if we can
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meet
at my place for a dinner this weekend.

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see
you
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soonBest
Wishes
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Nisha

IELTS letter You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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