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You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party OKL7
Dear Ramesh, I hope you are doing well; I am celebrating my son's sixth birthday party next week and this would be a memorable event in our life. We had waited a whole year since he turned 5 last year and we had been planning for his 6th birthday party ever since then. I want you to be a part of this celebration and humbly request you to attend it. It would be an amazing experience if you bring your children along with you. This event would we held in Rose Garden Convention hall, which is situated near my house on 18th march 2021. My wife and I would be happy to be your host at the party and once again I request you to make an appearance at my son's birthday party, we would we definitely delighted to receive you at the reception on the party night. Yours faithfully, Mohammed Ali.
Dear Ramesh, I hope you are doing well; I am celebrating my son's sixth birthday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
next
week and this would be a memorable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
in our life. We had waited a whole year since he turned 5 last
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
year and
we had been planning for his 6th birthday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
ever since then.

I want you to be a part of this celebration and
humbly
request you to attend it. It would be an amazing experience if you bring your children along with you. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
would we held in Rose Garden Convention hall, which
is situated
near my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
18th march 2021
.

My wife and I would be happy to be your host at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
and once again I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an appearance at my son's birthday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
, we would we definitely delighted to receive you at the reception on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
night.

Yours
faithfully
, Mohammed Ali.
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IELTS letter You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

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152 words
6.0
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