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You are working in an English speaking country. Recently, you have learned that a person who lives near your home can offer English lessons. Write a letter to this person. In this letter, Tell him / her how you got to know about the lesson Explain why you are interested in this lesson Say when and where you want to have the lesson

You are working in an English speaking country. Recently, you have learned that a person who lives near your home can offer English lessons. Write a letter to this person. In this letter, Tell him / her how you got to know about the lesson Explain why you are interested in this lesson Say when and where you want to have the lesson lyY1
Dear Mrs. Annie, I write this latter to know about English lessons. I am working as accountant in custom clearance office. I live near your apartment. I know about this from local newspaper “Divya Bhaskar”. You mentioned address of your house, where you give English lessons. And I found that your house is near my house so it is easy for me to come for lessons. As I mentioned I am working as accountant so in this country you have to know English very well. I complete my study in Gujarati language. I am able to read and write English but I am not able to communicate in English. So I think your lessons are helpful for me to improve communication skill. I think to join your classes from next Monday. My working time is 9 am to 6 pm. I will take this classes after 7 pm at your places. As per advertisement you are my neighbor so hope this time will also suits you. Hoping for your best efforts. Your’s faithfully, Disha Mirani
Dear Mrs. Annie,

I write this latter to know about English lessons. I am working as accountant in custom clearance office.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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near your apartment.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know about this from local newspaper “Divya Bhaskar”. You mentioned address of your
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house
, where you give English lessons. And I found that your
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house
is near my
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house
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so
it is easy for me to
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come
for lessons.

As I mentioned I am working as accountant
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so
in this country you
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have to
know English
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very
well. I complete my study in Gujarati language. I am able to read and write English
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but
I am not able to communicate in English.
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So
I
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think
your lessons are helpful for me to
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improve
communication
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skill
.

I
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think
to
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join
your classes from
next
Monday. My working time is 9 am to 6 pm. I will take this classes after 7 pm at your places.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
per advertisement you are my neighbor
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so
hope this time will
also
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "suit"
suits
you.

Hoping for your best efforts.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?
Your’s
faithfully
,

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Disha
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Mirani

IELTS letter You are working in an English speaking country. Recently, you have learned that a person who lives near your home can offer English lessons. Write a letter to this person. In this letter, Tell him / her how you got to know about the lesson Explain why you are interested in this lesson Say when and where you want to have the lesson

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174 words
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