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You are working in an English speaking country. Recently, you have learned that a person who lives near your home can offer English lessons. Write a letter to this person. In this letter, Tell him / her how you got to know about the lesson Explain why you are interested in this lesson Say when and where you want to have the lesson

You are working in an English speaking country. Recently, you have learned that a person who lives near your home can offer English lessons. Write a letter to this person. In this letter, Tell him / her how you got to know about the lesson Explain why you are interested in this lesson Say when and where you want to have the lesson lyY1

Dear Mrs. Annie, I write this latter to know about English lessons. I am working as accountant in custom clearance office. I live near your apartment. I know about this from local newspaper “Divya Bhaskar”. You mentioned address of your house, where you give English lessons. And I found that your house is near my house so it is easy for me to come for lessons. As I mentioned I am working as accountant so in this country you have to know English very well. I complete my study in Gujarati language. I am able to read and write English but I am not able to communicate in English. So I think your lessons are helpful for me to improve communication skill. I think to join your classes from next Monday. My working time is 9 am to 6 pm. I will take this classes after 7 pm at your places. As per advertisement you are my neighbor so hope this time will also suits you. Hoping for your best efforts. Your’s faithfully, Disha Mirani

Dear Mrs. Annie,

I write this latter to know about English lessons. I am working as accountant in custom clearance office. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 near your apartment.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know about this from local newspaper “Divya Bhaskar”. You mentioned address of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, where you give English lessons. And I found that your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 is near my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is easy for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for lessons.

As I mentioned I am working as accountant This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 in this country you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 know English This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. I complete my study in Gujarati language. I am able to read and write English This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am not able to communicate in English. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 your lessons are helpful for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 your classes from next
 Monday. My working time is 9 am to 6 pm. I will take this classes after 7 pm at your places. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 per advertisement you are my neighbor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 hope this time will also
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "suit"suit
suits
 you.

Hoping for your best efforts.

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Your’s
faithfully
,

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