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You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party G6OL
Dear Traverse, Hope this letter reaches you in good health and spirit. My life, of course, is going as usual except that my family is planning big to celebrate my son’s 6th birthday next week on 4th of December, and my whole family would very much wish for you to attend and enjoy the party. To give you little idea about the schedule of the birthday party, we will start our program at around 7 pm with a very popular children’s song, to be sung by the little school friends of my son, followed by a display of some of the old and funny videos of him from his infancy. Later on, some light snacks will be provided to refresh the guests which will include my family members, close relatives and close friends. At around 9. 00 pm, we will start the cake cutting ceremony. Finally, we will sign off with serving dinner to all the guests. Anyway, you must know how much my son really likes you, and what a great fan he has been of you because of your funny cartoon drawings. So, please come to the party because it would mean a lot to my whole family. Yours sincerely, John Larry
Dear Traverse,

Hope this letter reaches you in
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health and spirit. My life,
of course
, is going as usual except that my
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family
is planning
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big
to celebrate my son’s 6th birthday
next
week on 4th of December, and my whole
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family
would
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very
much wish for you to attend and enjoy the party.

To give you
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little
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idea
about the schedule of the birthday party, we will
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start
our program at around 7 pm with a
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very
popular children’s song, to
be sung
by the
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little
school friends of my son, followed by a display of
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some of the
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old
and
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funny
videos of him from his infancy. Later on,
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some
light snacks will
be provided
to refresh the guests which will include my
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family
members, close relatives and close friends. At around 9. 00 pm, we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the cake cutting ceremony.
Finally
, we will
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sign
off with serving dinner to all the guests.

Anyway, you
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must
know how much my son
really
likes you, and what a great fan he has been of you
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because
of your
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funny
cartoon drawings.
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So
,
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please
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come
to the party
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because
it would mean a lot to my whole
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family
. Yours
sincerely
,

John Larry
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IELTS letter You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

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