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Write a letter to the landlord and complain about the repair work. In your letter, you should include: The details of last repair What the problem is Give suggestions to landlord on how to repair it

Write a letter to the landlord and complain about the repair work. In your letter, you should include: The details of last repair What the problem is Give suggestions to landlord on how to repair it aMG7
Dear Mr. Patel, My name is Disha Mirani. I am writing this letter to complain you about the repaired work you did in my Bathroom and Hall. I am living on rent in your flat located in Paldi area. You know that you repaired Bathroom shower in last December. Now the shower was continuously tap and every time water came in all rooms. And I faced same problem about water. Because of that I slip twice so it is also scary. You also repaired door’s lock in Hall. Now a days the lock of main door is also not working properly. Locked was broken down so it is risky for safety. Because mostly time my child is alone in the house. I request you to done all work properly. Because I have 2 year child, so both problems are risky for my child. I am working woman so you can contact me on 7574968881 whenever you will come with carpenter. Hoping for your quick action. Yours faithfully, Disha Mirani
Dear Mr. Patel,

My name is
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Disha
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Mirani
. I am writing this letter to complain you about the repaired work you did in my Bathroom and Hall. I am living on rent in your flat located in
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Paldi
area.

You know that you repaired Bathroom shower in last December.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
the shower was
continuously
Consider using a past participle here: "tapped".
tap
and every time water came in all rooms. And I faced same problem about water.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of that I slip twice
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so
it is
also
scary.

You
also
repaired door’s lock in Hall.
Did you mean "nowadays"?
Now a days
the lock of main door is
also
not working
properly
. Locked
was broken
down
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it is risky for safety.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
mostly
time my child is alone in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

I request you
Did you mean "to do"?
to done
all work
properly
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
I have 2 year
Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: "children".
child
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
both problems are risky for my child. I am working woman
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you can contact me on 7574968881 whenever you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
with carpenter.

Hoping for your quick action.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Disha
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Mirani

IELTS letter Write a letter to the landlord and complain about the repair work. In your letter, you should include: The details of last repair What the problem is Give suggestions to landlord on how to repair it

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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