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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer dRPd
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to provide a feedback on the gastrological Skill which I have taken recently your renowned institued The kitchen King. I was quite weak in chopping and cooking various food. Hence I was join the class and I have plasant experience at the class. I have done variety of chopping and different cuisine in it. I was enroll on 15 Feb 2021, 4 week course. The course was fasinating me. I learn various type of chopping with knife tools. also make diverse cultural food as well as cuisuien also. In addition, I can easily made numerous salad such as vegetable, fruits So on. I have been using lesson on weekends and my kith and kins recomand me. My cooking much better for chopping techqunics and making it. Moreover, whenever parties, frestival and occasion, I have been cooking various types of food and guest are appriciat my gastrology skill. I recommend you for baking skill because every one have not know about to use oven or how temparature set proper way. If you will planning start bakery class please informe me first. I would be delightful to join in this course. I look forward to hear your optimistic response soon. Yours Faithfully Merry Sharma
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to provide a feedback on the
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gastrological
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Skill
which I have taken recently your renowned
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institued
The kitchen King. I was quite weak in
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chopping
and cooking various food.
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Hence
I was
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join
the
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class
and I have
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plasant
experience at the
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class
. I have done variety of
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chopping
and
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different
cuisine in it.

I was
Consider using a past participle here: "enrolled".
enroll
on 15 Feb 2021,
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4 week
course. The course was
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fasinating
me. I learn various type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chopping
with knife tools.
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also
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make
diverse cultural food
as well
as
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cuisuien
also
.
In addition
, I can
easily
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "make"
made
numerous salad such as vegetable, fruits
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So
on.

I have been using lesson on weekends and my kith and
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kins
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recomand
me. My cooking much better for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chopping
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techqunics
and making it.
Moreover
, whenever parties,
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frestival
and occasion, I have been cooking various types of food and guest are
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appriciat
my
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gastrology
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skill
.

I recommend you for baking
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skill
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because
every one have not
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know
about to
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use
oven or how
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temparature
set proper way.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "plan"
planning
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start
bakery
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class
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please
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informe
me
first
. I would be delightful to
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join
in this course.

I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
your optimistic response
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
Faithfully


Merry Sharma

IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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208 words
6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
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