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Write a letter to your manager about your work from the last year. In your letter include: • What you did • What you think you could improve • A training request

Write a letter to your manager about your work from the last year. In your letter include: • What you did • What you think you could improve • A training request AMVw

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with reference to the assignment that I completed last year. My name is Mr. Adam Fleming holding an employee card: 7967A. I am working as an Engineering Manager in Infrastructural Department for one of our prestigious client in Qatar. I completed an economical design for one of the Infrastructural projects in North of Qatar based on the project requirements. Moreover, the project also meets the design criteria as per the Qatar construction Specification 2018. During design approval stage of the aforesaid project, there were some design flaws which were pointed out by the client. However, due to my limited experience in electrical design some of them were not adhered as per the concerned authority. Since there was a failure in electrical design, client hired an electrical expert for a short stint to eradicate those errors. Considering the defects occurred during the electrical design, I kindly request you to arrange a training for a short term. This will help me to get acquainted with the electrical guidelines as well. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mr. Adam Fleming

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with reference to the assignment that I completed last year.

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I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Mr. Adam Fleming