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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: 1. give details of what went wrong 2. explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time 3. say what action you would like the manager to take

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: 1. give details of what went wrong 2. explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time 3. say what action you would like the manager to take Nkjg
Dear Mr. Jones, I am writing to complain about the inadequate heating facilities in your hotel rooms. I stayed in your hotel last month for 1 night during a business trip, and I was allocated room 5A, which is a deluxe suite. Unfortunately, due to a technical issue, I had to wait at the front desk for an hour to check in. When the room was allocated, I was surprised that the heating system was not working. In addition to this, there was a bad smell coming from the vents, which made my stay uncomfortable. Although this issue was reported to the front desk and a room change was requested, no solution was provided. Fortunately, I had carried a portable heater. Obviously, its effectiveness was limited, which meant that I was cold the whole night. In order to resolve this issue, I would like the management of the hotel to immediately repair the heating system, and I would also like refund of the amount I paid. I hope that you will give prompt attention to this matter. Yours Sincerely, Faith Jonas
Dear Mr. Jones,

I am writing to complain about the inadequate heating facilities in your hotel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
. I stayed in your hotel last month for 1 night during a business trip, and I
was allocated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
5A, which is a deluxe suite.

Unfortunately, due to a technical issue, I had to wait at the front desk for an hour to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
in. When the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
was allocated
, I
was surprised
that the heating system was not working.
In addition
to this, there was a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
smell coming from the vents, which made my stay uncomfortable.

Although this issue
was reported
to the front desk and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
was requested
, no solution
was provided
.
Fortunately
, I had carried a portable heater.
Obviously
, its effectiveness
was limited
, which meant that I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
the whole night.

In order to resolve this issue, I would like the management of the hotel to immediately repair the heating system, and I would
also
like refund of the amount I paid.

I hope that you will give prompt attention to this matter.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Faith Jonas
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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: 1. give details of what went wrong 2. explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time 3. say what action you would like the manager to take

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  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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