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You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party AjpmX

Dear John, How are you? . Hope this letter finds you at the peak of your health and spirit. I am going to arrange a birthday party on December 4th for my son and I would like to invite you with your whole family to this special occasion. The party will be held at the clubhouse near my house on December 4th in the evening time. Besides, we are going to follow some themes at this party, which include the different various dress codes such as superheroes costume. Moreover, The party will start around 7: PM with some light children's songs and after that we will going to play some outdoor games with our families to know each other litter more. Although, my son really like you for your cartons drawings and he will be happy if you join us at his birthday. I hope you will accept my invitation. Look forward to seeing you soon. Yours Sincerely, Peel

Dear John, How are you? Don't put a space before the full stop.
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party
 on December 4th for my son and I would like to invite you with your whole family to this special occasion. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will be held
 at the clubhouse near my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 on December 4th in the evening time. Besides
, we are going to follow This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 themes at this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
, which include the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 various dress codes such as superheroes costume. Moreover
, The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 around 7: PM with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 light children's songs and after that we will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"go
going
 to play This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 outdoor games with our families to know each other litter more. Although, my son really
 like you for your cartons Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).drawings, and
drawings and
 he will be happy if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 us at his birthday. I hope you will accept my invitation. Look forward to seeing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Yours Sincerely
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Peel

IELTS letter You will be celebrating your son's 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son's birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

158 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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