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Telling friend about your new university

Telling friend about your new university 85QKP

Hi Thanks for asking How are you? It was the best massage I had received today (the most amazing gift in my birthday) You made my day finally I got 6 in my IELTS exam (6. 5 in my speaking and listening but I still struggle in my writing and reading)so I applied to many universities in the UK and I got just conditional offers and I have offers from two Australian Universities but the borders are closed until the end of this year (I haven’t heard any news about that)so I decided to do my IELTS exam on 17th of April.

Hi

Thanks for asking

How are you?

It was the best Possibly confused word: Did you mean "message" (= communication, or what is communicated) instead of 'massage' (= action of rubbing, kneading or hitting someone's body)?message
massage
 I had received This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 (the most amazing gift The usual preposition for "birthdays" is "on".  Revise: "on my birthday".on my birthday
in my birthday
)

You made my day finally
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 6 in my IELTS exam (6. 5 in my speaking and listening This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I still
 struggle in my writing and reading)This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I applied to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 universities in the UK

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 conditional offers and I have offers from two Australian Universities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the borders are closed
 until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this year (I haven’t heard any news about that)This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I decided to do my IELTS exam on 17th of April. 

IELTS letter Telling friend about your new university

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

102 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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