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You are interested in studying on a short course at a college in an English-speaking country. Write a letter to the college. In your letter you should say: which course you are interested in and why describe your educational background and work experience and say why you would like to study at that college.

You are interested in studying on a short course at a college in an English-speaking country. Write a letter to the college. In your letter you should say: which course you are interested in and why describe your educational background and work experience and say why you would like to study at that college. g5DnO
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to show my interest of studying in your college. I want to study accounting management from your college. Because acoounting is my major, I opt this subject for furthur study. I am a student of commerce stream. As accounting has good scope, I choose this subject. I have more than eighty percent marks in final board exams. I not only studied but side by side also worked as a accountant in our small shop. Noreover, I have keen intrest in accounting and I want to forword it to secure my future in this stream. I am daily reader of The Times of GTA newspaper and I read many positive reviews about your college. I, therefore, make my mind to study from your highly reputated college. I want to confirm my seat in sheridan college in davis campus that is near to my residence. Thanks you for reading my letter from your tight schedule yours faithfully Harjot Singh
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to
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show
my interest of studying in your college. I want to study accounting management from your college.
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Because
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acoounting
is my major, I opt this subject for
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furthur
study.

I am a student of commerce stream. As accounting has
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good
scope, I choose this subject. I have more than eighty percent marks in final board exams. I not
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only
studied
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but
side by side
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worked as
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accountant in our
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small
shop.
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Noreover
, I have keen
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intrest
in accounting and I want to
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forword
it to secure my future in this stream.

I am daily reader of The Times of GTA newspaper and I read
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many
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positive
reviews about your college. I,
therefore
,
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make
my mind to study from your
highly
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reputated
college.
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I
want to confirm my seat in
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sheridan
college in
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davis
campus
that is
near to my residence.

Did you mean "Thank you"?
Thanks you
for reading my letter from your tight schedule

yours
faithfully


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Harjot
Singh
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IELTS letter You are interested in studying on a short course at a college in an English-speaking country. Write a letter to the college. In your letter you should say: which course you are interested in and why describe your educational background and work experience and say why you would like to study at that college.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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