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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying a course, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a course. Suggest what you will do later at work with the time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. Write at least 150 words.

You are studying a course, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a course. Suggest what you will do later at work with the time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. RNym8
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing a letter to request an early leave on Monday and Wednesday to attend the LCCI accounting course. Taking the accounting course is beneficial in my job. As I need to do expense and petty cash reports and communicate with the Account department every month, it helps me to understand the concepts. It also shortens my time to complete the tasks. Moreover, I would like to make more contributions to the company. After taking this course, I will apply for the examination and get the qualification. I have the ability to handle more tasks and reduce the workload of the Account department. The class starts from 5th April on Monday and Wednesday evenings at 6: 30pm. The course ends at the end of July. I hope to leave the office at 5pm. It is appreciated that if the request is accepted. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Carol Yeung (157 words)
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing a letter to request an early
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
on Monday and Wednesday to attend the
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LCCI
accounting course.

Taking the accounting course is beneficial in my job. As I need to do expense and petty cash reports and communicate with the Account department every month, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me to understand the concepts. It
also
shortens my time to complete the tasks.
Moreover
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
more contributions to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. After taking this course, I will apply for the examination and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the qualification. I have the ability to handle more tasks and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the workload of the Account department.

The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
from 5th April on Monday and Wednesday evenings at 6: 30pm. The course ends at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of July. I hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the office at 5pm. It
is appreciated
that if the request is
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accepted
.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

Carol
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Yeung


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IELTS letter You are studying a course, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a course. Suggest what you will do later at work with the time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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158 words
6.0
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