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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: • introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: • introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan BJMyw
Dear Sir, My name is Santhosh, I am a resident of Townhouse Crescent, I have been living in this place since 10 years near rowmill lake park. I am writing this letter to report about the public park which is put to sale by our local muncipal council to some corporate company. When I was going through news paper I read an advertisement in classifieds it states that our local muncipality is planning to sell this beautiful park to private firm, I was extremely shocked reading this news. This park is essential for our residents, here every morning and evening people gather to perform healthy activities like, yoga, running, jogging and conversations to relief stress. Moreover, this is the only greenery place which has wide variety of plant species which supplies fresh oxygen to our locals and controls air pollution in this area. I request your newspaper to take this as a matter of urgency and publish as soon as possible. However, me and locals are planning to file a lawsuite against local council if they do not withdraw their deal with company. Moreover, we will protest against them untill they change their decision on selling park. Waiting to hear from you soon Yours faithfully, E. Santhosh
Dear Sir,

My name is Santhosh, I am a resident of Townhouse Crescent, I have been living in this place since 10 years near
rowmill
lake park.

I am writing this letter to report about the public park which
is put
to sale by our
local
muncipal
council to
some
corporate
company
. When I was going through
news paper
I read an advertisement in classifieds it states that our
local
muncipality
is planning to sell this
beautiful
park to private firm, I was
extremely
shocked reading this news.

This park is essential for our residents, here every morning and evening
people
gather to perform healthy activities like, yoga, running, jogging and conversations to relief
stress
.
Moreover
, this is the
only
greenery place which has wide variety of plant species which supplies fresh oxygen to our
locals
and controls air pollution in this area.

I request your newspaper to take this as a matter of urgency and publish as
soon
as possible.
However
, me and
locals
are planning to file a
lawsuite
against
local
council if they do not withdraw their deal with
company
.
Moreover
, we will protest against them
untill
they
change
their decision on selling park.

Waiting to hear from you
soon


Yours
faithfully
,

E. Santhosh
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IELTS letter There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: • introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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  American English
7 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
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