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Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter ● Describe your colleague’s job at the company ● Describe a time you worked with this Person ● Explain why you believe this person deserves the award

Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter ● Describe your colleague’s job at the company ● Describe a time you worked with this Person ● Explain why you believe this person deserves the award PVr6X
Dear Ms. Jackson, I hope this letter finds you good. As you will be aware, it’s that time of the year when the company awards an employee as ‘employee of the year’. On this occasion, I would like to suggest Ms. Steph be awarded with employee of the year, as she has been incredible. I have been working with her since she joined two years back and the work she has done in managing relations with our clients has has increased our reputation in the market. This has led to increased revenue in our company as we have won all the tenders and most of these were big contracts worth millions of dollars. Also, working with Ms. Steph has been a privilege as she has immense experience and skill of which not only the company but many employees have benefited. I hope Ms. Steph is awarded for her attitude and skills. Kind Regards, Vaibhav.
Dear Ms. Jackson,

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company
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‘employee
of the
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year’
. On this occasion, I would like to suggest Ms. Steph
be awarded
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employee
of the
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year
, as she has been incredible.

I have been working with her since she
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joined
two years back and the work she has done in managing relations with our clients
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has has
increased our reputation in the market. This has led to increased revenue in our
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company
as we have won all the tenders and most of these were
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big
contracts worth millions of dollars.
Also
, working with Ms. Steph has been a privilege as she has immense experience and
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skill
of which not
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company
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employees
have benefited.

I hope Ms. Steph
is awarded
for her attitude and
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skills
.

Kind Regards,

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Vaibhav
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IELTS letter Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter ● Describe your colleague’s job at the company ● Describe a time you worked with this Person ● Explain why you believe this person deserves the award

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